Score: 10

"Awesome!"

submission: JonBro's Newgrounds Pass

date: June 27, 2008

JonBro let me play this like 2 months before he released it here, I was very flattered! Great job JonBro, but I had to skip frames on the raw .swf to get the end as the questions were very tricky. But tricky is good, people will play it more or they will just get a walkthrough.

=D

Score: 7

"Not Gears of War"

submission: Gears of Stickwars

date: June 27, 2008

The animation was good and some parts of the flash were exciting, but it just failed the capture the essence of GoW. For example, you should have made the main characters hide behind objects and using more tactical manovurs. The Kryl looked like bats and the thing at the end just looked like a tarantula, I guess you meant it to be a giant locust (like the ones you have to kill with the hammer of dawn). There weapons need to be more significant, like the chainsaw parts were not graphic enough like in the game so those parts were rather wasted. Also, at one point one the stickmen fires some sort of a rocket. This weapon is not in GoW at all. The only thing close to it is the boomshot and those don't have a scope and isn't used to kill enemies in the sky. Also there needs to be sections of dialogue to develop the characters like in the game.

Overall, it was a decent flash, you probably just need the research GoW a little more.

Score: 3

"needs work"

submission: Solid Snake Soundboard

date: June 25, 2008

I don't like soundboards because you haven't actually taken the time to add your own work in there. All there is are sound clips which aren't yours and i'm sure are copyrighted and graphics which aren't yours. Also, I think it's pretty cheeky to put an ads preloader at the start don't you think? Anyway, pretty good sound board as sound boards go.

Score: 10

"Fantastic"

submission: Locust Toybox - Crayon Miracle

date: August 17, 2007

Brilliant song, I can't enough of that awesome guitar riff! I love you music.

Score: 10

"Utterly Amazing!"

submission: SR - St. James

date: February 16, 2007

This is by far the best audio track i've ever heard on Newgrounds, this should be a Diamond Track for sure. I just love the track, the drum beats and the other instruments you've used just blend together so well.

Keep up the amazing audio work!

Score: 9

"Nice and peaceful"

submission: Guitar type song

date: February 13, 2007

Good job, I thought this music peace was nice and peaceful as well as being quite exciting. I think this music would be best suited for the start of a flash where it is panning down the sky into a neighbourhood and maybe introducing some credits.